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  1. Posted: February 27, 2018In: Romance

    When he meets his holiday romance at the same hotel from 20 years ago, a broke Greek waiter must help organize her wedding to one of the most wealthy and prominent men in the country.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 28, 2018 at 5:19 am

    (wouldn't he try to woo her? Is only Primal even if he's broke..) why should he "..help organize her wedding to one of the most wealthy and prominent men in the country" wouldn't she rather marry someone who she likes.. Also What stands in his way? . . Are you going for a "casablanca" like protagoniRead more

    (wouldn’t he try to woo her? Is only Primal even if he’s broke..)

    why should he “..help organize her wedding to one of the most wealthy and prominent men in the country”
    wouldn’t she rather marry someone who she likes..
    Also
    What stands in his way?
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    Are you going for a “casablanca” like protagonist?

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  2. Posted: February 22, 2018In: SciFi

    Trapped in a simulated loop of Earth’s final year before war ravaged the world, a increasingly pessimistic time traveller-to-be must test an increasingly severe sequence of events before going back in time to save the planet for real.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 22, 2018 at 7:13 pm

    Why must HE care? how does it personally matters to him? Why NOW? It seems to lack an Inciting Incident Also, if it's a loop, then the clock isn't ticking right? because If they fail to train themselves (i am guessing) "the final year" will start again..

    Why must HE care? how does it personally matters to him?
    Why NOW? It seems to lack an Inciting Incident

    Also, if it’s a loop, then the clock isn’t ticking right?
    because If they fail to train themselves (i am guessing) “the final year” will start again..

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  3. Posted: February 14, 2018In: SciFi

    When he meets a cyborg who comes from an earth invaded by alien body snatchers, a hardened sheriff must save his family and stop the body snatchers before their invasion of earth.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 14, 2018 at 2:36 pm

    another version: "When a hardened sheriff meets a cyborg claiming to have come from near future earth--invaded by alien-race, he must get over his scepticism and prove his claims to the government before their arrival.." Because just "getting over his own scepticism" isn't a strong goal and neitherRead more

    another version:

    “When a hardened sheriff meets a cyborg claiming to have come from near future earth–invaded by alien-race, he must get over his scepticism and prove his claims to the government before their arrival..”

    Because just “getting over his own scepticism” isn’t a strong goal and neither resolves the case,
    since the “cyborgs” are a norm on present-day-earth but “alien invasion” isn’t, if they prove–in time–to the government their truth, the scientists could plan to contain the situation..

    (the surviving cyborg did travel back in time–from “near future”….i am guessing the humans have high tech to face the aliens)

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