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  1. Posted: February 5, 2018In: Thriller

    When an assassin whose mind is reformatted after every 72 hours falls for his latest target he will use his skills to take down those targeting her before his mind resets again.

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    Added an answer on February 5, 2018 at 6:14 pm

    (it's a promising plot..for obvious reasons) but you are headed towards a tragedy.. now that there are multiple hunters for a single target, means it matters-personally-to the organisation hiring them, that she is dealt with.. when the MC becomes aware of their personal grudge (after every bounty huRead more

    (it’s a promising plot..for obvious reasons)
    but you are headed towards a tragedy..
    now that there are multiple hunters for a single target, means it matters-personally-to the organisation hiring them, that she is dealt with..
    when the MC becomes aware of their personal grudge (after every bounty hunter is taken care of) he decides to burn it to the ground…even if it means his own end

    except when all this is over, she returns to him (having forgotten her and they fall in love again)
    (pretty clich?d so..)

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  2. Posted: February 1, 2018In: Drama

    When an idealistic boy tired of bullying establishes a secret club of victims to impart justice, some members of the group begin to turn into very dangerous bullies.

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    Added an answer on February 2, 2018 at 3:15 am

    the premise is pretty cool kindly include if your main character's part of those getting bullied ...and a hint of his age Also it would be better if the stakes were made more obvious and personal with establishing the conflict..

    the premise is pretty cool
    kindly include if your main character’s part of those getting bullied
    …and a hint of his age

    Also it would be better if the stakes were made more obvious and personal with establishing the conflict..

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  3. Posted: May 29, 2017In: Comedy

    Dear fellow writers, I wanted to share with you the good news about the release of my latest little project – a comedy web series titled God’s 17. You can check out our latest episode on our website: www.gods17.com

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 21, 2018 at 6:39 pm

    thank you NirShelter for making the best webseries The Script is super sharp genius; Presence of a spectator (cameraman) works so well :D the casting decisions are brilliant to say the least There's so much to learn from it!! Wow! this shi(p) is fu(nn)ing great

    thank you NirShelter for making the best webseries
    The Script is super sharp genius; Presence of a spectator (cameraman) works so well 😀
    the casting decisions are brilliant to say the least
    There’s so much to learn from it!!
    Wow! this shi(p) is fu(nn)ing great

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