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  1. Posted: January 30, 2018In: Public

    Question for the admins… After a log has an initial thread, and later down the line additional changes are made, can you consider a way to post updates to the older thread while being able to bump it back to the top so that people will not miss things?

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    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 6, 2018 at 2:57 pm

    3 TABS:1. Latest loglines2. Recently Updated loglines3. Loglines less viewed/ less replied to

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  2. Posted: February 6, 2018In: Action

    When a sarcastic lesbian becomes best friends with the God of War, she gets dragged into a centuries long battle for the fate of mankind.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 6, 2018 at 2:37 pm

    kcguru wants to establish "this isn't a plot in romance" by creating a lesbian protagonist the issue is this particular detail doesn't contribute to 1. her role, 2. or dramatic need 3. or the Inciting Incident the three of which MUST be in a logline this "goal" to "resolve a war for the fate of mankRead more

    kcguru wants to establish “this isn’t a plot in romance” by creating a lesbian protagonist
    the issue is
    this particular detail doesn’t contribute to
    1. her role,
    2. or dramatic need
    3. or the Inciting Incident

    the three of which MUST be in a logline

    this “goal” to “resolve a war for the fate of mankind” does not throw light on her “dramatic need” (doesn’t tell us “why?”)
    doesn’t makes her–feel personal enough, to–act

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  3. Posted: February 5, 2018In: Western

    The harsh realities of the Wild West challenges a New York marshal’s stoicism when he searches for a fugitive he must capture alive to earn a spot in the Secret Service.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 5, 2018 at 6:20 pm

    what--specifically--is the harsh reality of wild west and how--exactly--does it challenge his stoicism although the character's goal is pretty clear, his dramatic need isn't.. & why now? PS. is n/a a possible title?

    what–specifically–is the harsh reality of wild west
    and how–exactly–does it challenge his stoicism

    although the character’s goal is pretty clear, his dramatic need isn’t..
    & why now?

    PS. is n/a a possible title?

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