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when a women recived text from her child passed away ten years ago ,she try to fined him to prove it is not illusion
After receiving a text from her child, ten years after his death...[[a woman tries to find him/ her, to prove its not an illusion]] for the part in brackets.. she wouldn't find her child just to prove her sanity, but because it's her child! Also the plot-verb resembles that one of a 2008 Eastwood fiRead more
After receiving a text from her child, ten years after his death…[[a woman tries to find him/ her, to prove its not an illusion]]
for the part in brackets..
she wouldn’t find her child just to prove her sanity, but because it’s her child!
Also the plot-verb resembles that one of a 2008 Eastwood film “changeling”
Also, what’s stopping her?
and if it is her child..why doesn’t (s)he just drop by-instead of texting her?
If it isn’t, you should find a way around “text from her child” in the logline..
“what’s stopping her…” MUST be a part of your logline..
See lessthis hour long dramatic comedy will follow a Native American Indian who found refuge in the city that never sleeps after being exiled from her reservation not only due to her sexuality, but for having a child out of wedlock?
hello mii, your version trimmed to - "After being exiled from her reservation for having an illegitimate child, a Native American Indian finds refuge in NYC" I agree with savinh0-in that-this logline doesn't commit to plot-play but only sets a premise based on the Inciting event. There are a countleRead more
hello mii,
your version trimmed to –
“After being exiled from her reservation for having an illegitimate child, a Native American Indian finds refuge in NYC”
I agree with savinh0-in that-this logline doesn’t commit to plot-play but only sets a premise based on the Inciting event. There are a countless ways it could go from there.
The drama is clear, but where’s the comedy in trying to sustain oneself.
Who are the Act-II characters,
how does our protagonist relates with them-while holding true to “her need to settle”-might make way for your plot
one last question,
See lesswhy specifically a Native American Indian? because if it doesn’t contribute to the events ahead, you can always reduce it into “a foreigner…”
after a bizarre experience in his lawn, a know-it-all businessman seeks out the-indian-guru-next-door to-instead-find himself in the drug business with a hippie
a slightly better take II.."After a topgun determines to get high for the first time, he find himself in a contract to manage a pot business, two days before his own media firm is to partner up with the DEA against the same issue"
a slightly better take II..
“After a topgun determines to get high for the first time, he find himself in a contract to manage a pot business, two days before his own media firm is to partner up with the DEA against the same issue”
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