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  1. Posted: January 3, 2018In: Crime

    A guy walks in a bar to find himself in the middle of a heist.

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    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 3, 2018 at 1:35 pm

    heist in a bar? now that's a joke

    heist in a bar?
    now that’s a joke

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  2. Posted: January 1, 2018In: Action

    A soldier returns home desiring to become a professional poker player, believing it’s a safer vocation than army combat, so she thought, until winning a large poker pot from a serial killer. Now she is back in a battle to save lives including her own.

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    Added an answer on January 1, 2018 at 12:30 pm

    google says a serial killer murders with no apparent motive and (typically) follows a characteristic, predictable behaviour pattern what's his "predictable behaviour pattern" or is he a psychopath instead? also "reckoning poker to be a safer vocation" isn't enough, add protag's history with it how dRead more

    google says a serial killer murders with no apparent motive and (typically) follows a characteristic, predictable behaviour pattern

    what’s his “predictable behaviour pattern” or is he a psychopath instead?

    also “reckoning poker to be a safer vocation” isn’t enough,
    add protag’s history with it

    how do you plan to make him likeable after establishing him as fickle (although, it could be done)

    I like the “back in battle” premise (are you thinking about a reluctant hero)
    good luck

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  3. Posted: January 22, 2016In: Drama

    After a sensitive cocoa farmer from Ecuador is getting engaged with a rich entrepreneur girl, he must decide between the marriage to rescue his bankrupt family plantation or his true love who lives far away in Germany.

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    Added an answer on December 31, 2017 at 8:08 pm

    If it is "true love" i would rather see him struggle bankruptcy

    If it is “true love” i would rather see him struggle bankruptcy

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