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  1. Posted: May 1, 2022In: Thriller

    Seeing his wife’s ghost each morning for breakfast a man becomes vigilante after the police decide to stop investigating her murder.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 3, 2022 at 1:21 am

    After reading the text under the logline I could make complete sense. So that needs to change. Otherwise I really like the idea/ where it’s going.

    After reading the text under the logline I could make complete sense. So that needs to change.
    Otherwise I really like the idea/ where it’s going.

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  2. Posted: July 5, 2014In: Public

    A corrupt rural sheriff must find a senator's abducted daughter to bring a quick end to an FBI manhunt that could expose his ties to local drug trafficking.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 22, 2021 at 4:38 pm

    Why do we root for him?

    Why do we root for him?

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  3. Posted: April 20, 2021In: Family

    Unbeknownst to Mani’s death at a construction site, Sivagami, his wife must work hard to repay the money her husband got from a nefarious recruiter and anticipate his return; Incompetent, Munniyapan accepts the recruiter’s idea to work at the same construction site gets electrocuted and die. His Mother and Grandfather continue to wait for their return.

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    Added an answer on April 22, 2021 at 4:30 pm

    How is Sivagami's life related to the family of Munniyapan? Sivagami's story seems to have the potential for action and conflict. 'Waiting for Munniyapan' isn't something very visual & engaging, unless you add necessary details to it. Hope this helps.

    How is Sivagami’s life related to the family of Munniyapan?

    Sivagami’s story seems to have the potential for action and conflict. ‘Waiting for Munniyapan’ isn’t something very visual & engaging, unless you add necessary details to it.

    Hope this helps.

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