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  1. Posted: April 21, 2021In: Drama

    Guided by their inspirational French teacher, a diverse group of adult students escape the backdrop of modern-day West London and find new meaning in their lives by exploring Frenchman Jean Giono’s celebrated short story ‘The Man Who Planted Trees’ about one man’s hope for humanity via his generosity to nature.

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    Added an answer on April 22, 2021 at 4:20 pm

    what constitutes 'exploring'? how do they 'find new meaning in their lives'? what specific action takes place?

    what constitutes ‘exploring’? how do they ‘find new meaning in their lives’? what specific action takes place?

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  2. Posted: April 21, 2021In: Fantasy

    A young man sees his dead girlfriend through near death experiences.

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    Added an answer on April 22, 2021 at 3:56 pm

    In the context of a logline this can be the inciting incident of the film. The premise has potential. His dramatic need to keep seeing his girlfriend can drive him to commit near death experiences. What stops him from doing so will provide the conflict necessary for a good story. So two things. JustRead more

    In the context of a logline this can be the inciting incident of the film. The premise has potential. His dramatic need to keep seeing his girlfriend can drive him to commit near death experiences. What stops him from doing so will provide the conflict necessary for a good story.

    So two things. Justifying the dramatic need to keep seeing her (beyond the nature of their relationship), some unfinished business or maybe the dead girlfriend leading him towards her cause of death. This could also lead you to the second thing – what’s stopping him? for instance, in this case, the forces responsible for her death could be preventing him from committing a series of NDEs.

    Hope this helps.

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  3. Posted: November 7, 2020In: Horror

    When a family member haunts them as a ghost, two dysfunctional families must cope with either life or death.

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    Added an answer on November 7, 2020 at 8:36 pm

    Sorry, this tells us nothing. Please go through the formula tab on the top. It's quite awesome :))

    Sorry, this tells us nothing. Please go through the formula tab on the top. It’s quite awesome :))

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