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Working back late Halloween night, a small town teacher and some resentful students are terrorized in their own school by a masked killer.
how about this-- "When some resentful students decide to terrify their small town teacher working late on halloween night, they end up instead facing a masked killer" It kinda implies: if a Teacher is working late, the setting is school. (You can still fit in "at school" before "on halloween night"Read more
how about this–
“When some resentful students decide to terrify their small town teacher working late on halloween night, they end up instead facing a masked killer”
It kinda implies: if a Teacher is working late, the setting is school.
(You can still fit in “at school” before “on halloween night” if you wish to)
PS. Cool Idea BTW ????
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It's weird In 2014 alone, three films match your logline "John Wick", "The Equaliser" & "Everly"
It’s weird
In 2014 alone, three films match your logline
“John Wick”, “The Equaliser” & “Everly”
See lessWhen a man?s new world crashes down around him because his old world comes calling, he unleashes hell on everyone responsible ? starting at the bottom and working his way up.
small enquiry 1. what's new world 2. what's old world 3. what's new world crashing down 4. what's old world comes calling 5. what's his unleashing hell on every one responsible 6. who is responsible 7. responsible for what 8. what's at the bottom 9. what's way upApart from that it reads just finePS.Read more
small enquiry
1. what’s new world
2. what’s old world
3. what’s new world crashing down
4. what’s old world comes calling
5. what’s his unleashing hell on every one responsible
6. who is responsible
7. responsible for what
8. what’s at the bottom
9. what’s way up
Apart from that it reads just fine
PS. I appreciate your brevity, but if you had any real idea it would be much better…
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