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  1. Posted: April 1, 2018In: Adventure

    3 siblings set out on an adventure with their father?s friend, a professor, to find out what caused his disappearance and stop the power that could destroy humanity that he was looking for.

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    Added an answer on April 1, 2018 at 1:02 pm

    "When dad goes missing, 3 siblings set out with his research colleague to conclude their latest project responsible for his disappearance" But When 3 siblings track down their father's disappearance to his recent research project, they must _______??

    “When dad goes missing, 3 siblings set out with his research colleague to conclude their latest project responsible for his disappearance”

    But
    When 3 siblings track down their father’s disappearance to his recent research project, they must _______??

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  2. Posted: March 31, 2018In: Examples

    After failing in bed with his love interest, a simple railroad dispatcher joins the resistance during World War II to prove his manhood

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    Added an answer on March 31, 2018 at 12:52 pm

    There's this other version I could think of "After the youngest from a disgraceful family becomes a railroad dispatcher, he joins the resistance during Hitler's regime to prove his manhood" But I prefer the version I originally posted Even if the Inciting Incident I specified happens around the midpRead more

    There’s this other version I could think of

    “After the youngest from a disgraceful family becomes a railroad dispatcher, he joins the resistance during Hitler’s regime to prove his manhood”

    But I prefer the version I originally posted
    Even if the Inciting Incident I specified happens around the midpoint, since it acts as a real catalyst to his arc.

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  3. Posted: March 31, 2018In: Horror

    Offered a drug at a high end party, a woman?s eyes slowly open to another dimension, she seeks remedy as she desperately attempts to reclaim her own sanity.

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    Added an answer on March 31, 2018 at 12:25 pm

    would you ever accept a mysterious drug? I wouldn't unless: alarmed by her descending career... (to make her a little less risk averse) but then you risk making it sound like "limitless" Also, what makes it better than the popular 2011 flick. He did it to write better i.e., how does "opening to anotRead more

    would you ever accept a mysterious drug?
    I wouldn’t

    unless:
    alarmed by her descending career…
    (to make her a little less risk averse)

    but then you risk making it sound like “limitless”
    Also, what makes it better than the popular 2011 flick. He did it to write better
    i.e., how does “opening to another dimension that exists along side our reality” helps her personally?
    since you need to show a roller coaster high before the midpoint swoops it down..

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