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A loyal husband and his wife have a double date with their two best friends. All goes well until the husband’s strong romantic feelings for his best friends’ girlfriend, who happens to be his ex, show up in the middle of the date. TITLE: Double Trouble
>>>A loyal husband and his wife If he's "loyal", he cannot have "strong romantic feelings" in the middle of their double date. Also, what happens as a result of this inciting incident? You need a goal for your protagonist--which reminds me--who is your protagonist?
>>>A loyal husband and his wife
If he’s “loyal”, he cannot have “strong romantic feelings” in the middle of their double date.
Also, what happens as a result of this inciting incident?
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When a magic notebook that kills who has a name written on it falls in the hand of a student that uses it to kill criminals, the law enforcement must find a way to stop him.
When a student starts killing criminals by recording their names in a supernatural notebook, "L"--a nameless detective must prevent him before he becomes unstoppable
When a student starts killing criminals by recording their names in a supernatural notebook, “L”–a nameless detective must prevent him before he becomes unstoppable
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The search for bone marrow isn't the only reason for their quest (since the transplant happens when a patient's HLA and that of a registry member or cord blood unit closely match)Any matching doner can work and it's quite common when blood relatives don't match.Having said that, your logline reads bRead more
The search for bone marrow isn’t the only reason for their quest
(since the transplant happens when a patient’s HLA and that of a registry member or cord blood unit closely match)
Any matching doner can work and it’s quite common when blood relatives don’t match.
Having said that, your logline reads beautifully!
I doubt if discovering they are adopted could be a strong inciting incident since the family–which adopted them–would love them as much (even more) and it could come as a surprise and then more of a curiosity, than a necessity to meet their biological family
It’s a great logline! Thumbs up!
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