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  1. Posted: April 4, 2018In: SciFi

    When bionic rivals–hired to reset the server–discover two halves of it in each other, they engage until one of them lives to receive the pay

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    Added an answer on April 5, 2018 at 12:25 am

    Take II When two penniless bionics realize that the server they were hired to reset is located in both of them, they turn against each other to receive the pay

    Take II

    When two penniless bionics realize that the server they were hired to reset is located in both of them, they turn against each other to receive the pay

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  2. Posted: April 4, 2018In: Horror

    The paranormal cases led a spiritual scientist to a mysterious world – a place where Vietnamese folklores collide and reveal a terrible curse between the Dragon and Fairy families, where she will finally find her destiny.

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    Added an answer on April 5, 2018 at 12:05 am

    His being spiritual is interesting but merely a detail in the logline, since it doesn't contribute to the Inciting Event-Character-Goal dynamicLooks like you have a potential story, which could benefit from the specificity of the "folklore" and the "curse" and his/her "destiny"Try and express it inRead more

    His being spiritual is interesting but merely a detail in the logline, since it doesn’t contribute to the Inciting Event-Character-Goal dynamic

    Looks like you have a potential story, which could benefit from the specificity of the “folklore” and the “curse” and his/her “destiny”

    Try and express it in this simple format below:

    “This particular event forces this particular character towards this particular goal”

    , focusing mainly on how the scientist’s involvement in this mystery leads him to his objective goal

    It tells us a scientist becomes a part of this mystery
    Then leaves us hanging there..

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  3. Posted: April 4, 2018In: Drama

    When an artist tries to protect his family from the strings of life, he loses it by being a Pac ? man.

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    Added an answer on April 4, 2018 at 11:27 pm

    "Strings of Life" is a 1987 single by Derrick May "Pac-Man" is a 1980 arcade released by Namco Am I missing something? Kindly click on the "formula tab" on top for more information

    “Strings of Life” is a 1987 single by Derrick May
    “Pac-Man” is a 1980 arcade released by Namco

    Am I missing something?
    Kindly click on the “formula tab” on top for more information

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