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  1. Posted: December 17, 2012In: Public

    When an idealistic free spirit discovers his best friend is terminally ill, he must inspire her through music to live, before she gives up hope.

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    Added an answer on December 21, 2012 at 12:28 am

    Yes I can see why a idealistic free spirit could have problems coming to terms with a friend dying. If the protagonist is the free spirit, I'd like to be given a clue as to what lesson he'll learn through the story. But like other people have said, the whole story is pretty much telegraphed.

    Yes I can see why a idealistic free spirit could have problems coming to terms with a friend dying. If the protagonist is the free spirit, I’d like to be given a clue as to what lesson he’ll learn through the story. But like other people have said, the whole story is pretty much telegraphed.

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  2. Posted: December 20, 2012In: Public

    A successful golf instructor reconnects with his appetite and love of the game, when he agrees to share his round with a younger raw sportswoman.

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    Added an answer on December 21, 2012 at 12:04 am

    I see him as successful but disilusioned and the course of the game he will decide how to go on with his career. So the something that happens, is mainly he overcomes the mistakes he has made and sees a way to put them right. Not too familiar with golf at a professional level. But see this as a amatRead more

    I see him as successful but disilusioned and the course of the game he will decide how to go on with his career. So the something that happens, is mainly he overcomes the mistakes he has made and sees a way to put them right.

    Not too familiar with golf at a professional level. But see this as a amateur round where I believe men and women can play together. If not, then I’ll make it part of the story that his influence allows her to have a game.

    It is very much a drama piece.

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  3. Posted: December 19, 2012In: Public

    Two teens on a police ride-along uncover a web of corruption, drugs and murder beneath the surface of their quiet Texas town – and must recover the evidence gathered by one teen's father, a cop murdered by his brother officers, if they're to survive the night…

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    Added an answer on December 20, 2012 at 8:57 pm

    Needs more clarity here because feels like there could be a good story here. It's the evidence gathered by one teen's father that confuses me. Is it one of the teens who is on the ride along or another? Who got murdered? Its all a little confusing. But stick with the theme of ride along as it has poRead more

    Needs more clarity here because feels like there could be a good story here. It’s the evidence gathered by one teen’s father that confuses me. Is it one of the teens who is on the ride along or another? Who got murdered? Its all a little confusing. But stick with the theme of ride along as it has potential.

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