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Seduced into a world of drugs, sex, and money after abandoning her loved ones, model-slash-actress hopeful must determine if losing herself, is worth it to become a star.
Sort of works. Just be specific. Remove the ambiguity (hopefully). That is good for marketing,, but you are trying to interest a producer who is a partner in development. They need to know what they are deciding on. There a million scripts, don't make them work to understand your work. Put her aim aRead more
Sort of works. Just be specific. Remove the ambiguity (hopefully). That is good for marketing,, but you are trying to interest a producer who is a partner in development. They need to know what they are deciding on. There a million scripts, don’t make them work to understand your work.
Put her aim and her struggles.
See lessAn equation(chemistry) to develop a psychedelic drug that can be ingested in many forms ,the results in longevity have the same effect,but in/on each individual will be processed differently.
It comes across as a marketing line. Find a character and tell the story through their eyes. Try that and post a new version as a comment
It comes across as a marketing line. Find a character and tell the story through their eyes. Try that and post a new version as a comment
See lessWhen her occult bookshop is burned down, an angry, self-loathing Witch must stop a secret organisation from murdering powerful witches.
You have a slight wording issue. You could assume that she knew about the organisation all along. So tie the fire and her discovery together and you are okay. Discovering a plan to kill witches after her occult shop is burnt down a woman must xxxx to save herself and other powerful witches.
You have a slight wording issue. You could assume that she knew about the organisation all along.
So tie the fire and her discovery together and you are okay.
Discovering a plan to kill witches after her occult shop is burnt down a woman must xxxx to save herself and other powerful witches.
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