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When his medication stops working, a divorced writer must relive the inception of his MYSTERIOUS ILLNESS to remember how he stopped it as a child. (26)
Just some clarification. If he stopped it when he was a child, why is he still taking medication?
Just some clarification. If he stopped it when he was a child, why is he still taking medication?
See lessA secretly gay detective in the 1940’s must investigate the murder of the man with whom he had a love affair with.
"The imitation Game", so much of the story revolves around Alan being gay. It drives his actions as well as opening him up for blackmail. Its not an audience device, it's a character motivation. I can see so much gold to mine here. When he wants to push on he gets asked "he was a fag, why do you carRead more
“The imitation Game”, so much of the story revolves around Alan being gay. It drives his actions as well as opening him up for blackmail. Its not an audience device, it’s a character motivation.
I can see so much gold to mine here. When he wants to push on he gets asked “he was a fag, why do you care?”, then “why aren’t you married Jones?”
It’s not a tada, it’s a constant threat to the MC.
See lessA secretly gay detective in the 1940’s must investigate the murder of the man with whom he had a love affair with.
I think this logline is completely serviceable. Your story is compelling and I can see all the turns laid out in front of me. Sometimes we are mistaken and start commenting on story rather than tightening a logline.
I think this logline is completely serviceable. Your story is compelling and I can see all the turns laid out in front of me. Sometimes we are mistaken and start commenting on story rather than tightening a logline.
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