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After she is possessed by two unresting young souls to avenge their deaths by an un- remorseful negligent nurse, a little girl must find the exorcist who can deliver her before she kills her negligent parents.
Possessed by the spirits of two vengeful child a girl must find an exeorist to free her before they drive her to kill her own parents. All the other stuff adds to confusion.
Possessed by the spirits of two vengeful child a girl must find an exeorist to free her before they drive her to kill her own parents.
All the other stuff adds to confusion.
See lessA desperately lonely woman is unknowingly trapped in purgatory until her grieving husband is finally able to let her go
If the husband is the protagonist that would make the McGuffin. So try writing it from the husbands POV and it enables action to be entered. A grieving husband must ..... to release his wife that doesn't realise she is stuck in purgatory. I may even drop the wife's knowledge. Leave it for the story.
If the husband is the protagonist that would make the McGuffin. So try writing it from the husbands POV and it enables action to be entered.
A grieving husband must ….. to release his wife that doesn’t realise she is stuck in purgatory.
I may even drop the wife’s knowledge. Leave it for the story.
See lessIn the final stages of war between three factions, an incredible warrior and huntsman is called upon to secure, protect and adapt a defenseless faction called Avagon in return to fulfill a lifelong family vendetta. If anyone would be so kind as to give me a straight, honest opinion on this concept for my 3rd year game project. Thank you!
Adapt them into what? That is the key to the logline for me. Don't need as much set for a film as you may for a video game. To fulfil a family vendetta a warrior must transform a helpless faction into a ...... in a hope to ....... I hope this helps.
Adapt them into what? That is the key to the logline for me. Don’t need as much set for a film as you may for a video game.
To fulfil a family vendetta a warrior must transform a helpless faction into a …… in a hope to …….
I hope this helps.
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