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When her main bread winner is fired, a maverick celebrity agent must battle her industry rivals and reinvent herself to save her business from impending financial ruin.
Reinvent herself for me is vague. It doesn't have a start or a finish. If I look for clues in your logline I can see maverick. So does the reinvention make her conservative? Overcome a fear of heights to become a skydiver is an example. "After years of burning bridges an agent loses her only big cliRead more
Reinvent herself for me is vague. It doesn’t have a start or a finish. If I look for clues in your logline I can see maverick. So does the reinvention make her conservative? Overcome a fear of heights to become a skydiver is an example.
“After years of burning bridges an agent loses her only big client, she must reinvent herself and win back people she wrong to save her business”. Off the top of my head. I was trying add a goal and specific action.
See lessWhen Western men suspiciously die in an peaceful Asian country the US counts as a key ally, an inexperienced American Embassy security official ruffles diplomatic feathers by claiming the country’s first serial killer has emerged and is probably an American.
After a murder a US diploma starts an incident by suggesting there is an American serial killer operating in Asia. This is an incident. But what is the story? What happens before and after is the story. Tell us that.
After a murder a US diploma starts an incident by suggesting there is an American serial killer operating in Asia.
This is an incident. But what is the story? What happens before and after is the story. Tell us that.
See lessWhen she falls for an old flame at a student reunion abroad, an engaged CEO must decide whether to break off the engagement for the affair and move overseas without job and friends.
It's a love story, stakes are always low. Is it important about the reunion? No, could be a conference, so we can drop that. Plus decisions are a split second event, hard to play out for over an hour. To give it duration talk about the things leading up to the decision. An affair with an old flame dRead more
It’s a love story, stakes are always low.
Is it important about the reunion? No, could be a conference, so we can drop that.
Plus decisions are a split second event, hard to play out for over an hour.
To give it duration talk about the things leading up to the decision.
An affair with an old flame drags a woman away from her fianc? and CEO job to unemployment and a foreign country if she lets it.
Hope this helps.
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