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Question: I suspect that most people here, like me, struggle to focus on the part of their story that’s important to logline. Mine is a complex of murders, mainly focused around concealing a galactic insurance fraud but including some revenge attempts by the contract killer. From MC’s perspective, there are multiple murders, a possible insurance fraud, the prime murderer is specifically after him and/or his family for revenge… Can people please suggest how to choose which elements/plot lines to logline and which to leave for the synopsis. e.g. in the movie “UP”, which is the more important: Carl reaching the Falls to fulfil his promise, Carl’s redemption, Carl speudo-adopting Russell.. etc.
Focus on the main character, the eyes you are telling the story through. Look at Saving Private Ryan, WW2 the invasion of Europe and they focus on one little slice. Discovering he is next a man must try to expose a murderius insurance conspiracy that goes to the highest levels of power. One mans jouRead more
Focus on the main character, the eyes you are telling the story through. Look at Saving Private Ryan, WW2 the invasion of Europe and they focus on one little slice.
Discovering he is next a man must try to expose a murderius insurance conspiracy that goes to the highest levels of power.
One mans journey.
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after a barely surviving a brutal rape a murderous vigilant must avoid increased police activity and the wraith of the community she is trying to protect to get justice.
after a barely surviving a brutal rape a murderous vigilant must avoid increased police activity and the wraith of the community she is trying to protect to get justice.
See lessA suspended detective confronts his past investigating an unsolved murder believing it?s connected to his partner?s killing that forces him to face himself, to his end or a cathartic answer for both murders and himself.
This reads like a pitch, still unsure what the movie/story is. "A suspended cop start privately investigating a cold case murder believing it is linked to his partners death but....," insert obstacles.
This reads like a pitch, still unsure what the movie/story is.
“A suspended cop start privately investigating a cold case murder believing it is linked to his partners death but….,” insert obstacles.
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