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  1. Posted: February 8, 2017In: Romance

    When she meets her old flame at a student reunion abroad, an engaged CEO must decide whether to cancel the wedding for the affair and move to a foreign country without any safety.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 8, 2017 at 8:39 pm

    Your story is a single question. Tells us everything around the decision. Here red is my take on Titanic, it may help. desparate to escape her abusive fiance a bankrupt heiress falls in love with a penniless artist on board Titanc. Gives you back story and motives. ?No doubt in your story, but not eRead more

    Your story is a single question. Tells us everything around the decision.

    Here red is my take on Titanic, it may help.

    desparate to escape her abusive fiance a bankrupt heiress falls in love with a penniless artist on board Titanc.

    Gives you back story and motives. ?No doubt in your story, but not evident in your logline.

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  2. Posted: February 8, 2017In: Romance

    After an agoraphobic bestseller-author meets a famous actress to work on a film-collaboration, he is forced to leave his house for PR dates in order to overcome his fear in public.

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    Added an answer on February 8, 2017 at 8:33 pm

    The line and story are okay. The punctuation makes it hard to read. The PR dates are not arranged to cure his argophobia, they are PR for the film I am guessing. But that isn't how it reads. After falling in love with an actress during a film collaboration an argophobic writer struggles to attend aRead more

    The line and story are okay. The punctuation makes it hard to read. The PR dates are not arranged to cure his argophobia, they are PR for the film I am guessing. But that isn’t how it reads.

    After falling in love with an actress during a film collaboration an argophobic writer struggles to attend a series of PR dates hoping to win her heart.

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  3. Posted: February 6, 2017In: SciFi

    When all traces of his existence are erased, and his wife and child with a man claiming to be him, a reporter must find out how and why he was deleted to recover his life and family.

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    Added an answer on February 7, 2017 at 7:51 am

    I can nearly see the movie. Can you add tone? Perhaps hint at the reason it happened by describing the journalist. It would great to know if it is scifi like blade runner or more real world like HER.

    I can nearly see the movie. Can you add tone? Perhaps hint at the reason it happened by describing the journalist.

    It would great to know if it is scifi like blade runner or more real world like HER.

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