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  1. Posted: February 1, 2017In: Horror

    ?Blamed for banishing the antichrist back to hell, a gang of demons must make their way across the city, as they fight through each territory, and the monsters that hold them down, to get back to their home turf, where they think they are safe.? ? THE FIENDS – by Judah Ray

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 1, 2017 at 9:25 pm

    A few things like 'bop', are confusing. in a nutshell "A group of demons must fight they way across town to their home after being blamed for banishing the antichrist". Now in The Warriors, I think they were framed.

    A few things like ‘bop’, are confusing.

    in a nutshell “A group of demons must fight they way across town to their home after being blamed for banishing the antichrist”.

    Now in The Warriors, I think they were framed.

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  2. Posted: February 1, 2017In: Drama

    When a man’s marriage proposal is curiously rejected, he secretly hires a private investigator to investigate; but when the PI ends up following the wrong girl, the man must learn to differentiate truth from fiction to win his girlfriend back.

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    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 1, 2017 at 9:09 pm

    You can drop the detail around the PI. ?Like Nir said they are hired in secret and they investigate, so just "hires PI is fine. curiously is okay by me. ?They've been dating for ages, she's always hinting, he asks, she says no. Even the PI being crap is okay.. Thing I think is lacking is the goal. HRead more

    You can drop the detail around the PI. ?Like Nir said they are hired in secret and they investigate, so just “hires PI is fine.

    curiously is okay by me. ?They’ve been dating for ages, she’s always hinting, he asks, she says no.

    Even the PI being crap is okay.. Thing I think is lacking is the goal. How goes figuring out truth from fiction win back his girlfriend? ?Explain that instead.

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  3. Posted: January 28, 2017In: SciFi

    In a future when clones are a trillion-dollar corporate secret, an LA homicide detective falsely accused of murder must track down her duplicate to prove her innocence. (UPDATED)

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    Added an answer on January 30, 2017 at 6:52 pm

    This will not be the first (or last) I disagree with my compatriots. Let's look at the colour your details have given. LA where beauty is king and it has its own look and feel. Think how different it would be if it was NYC. Trillion dollar secret. So we know who is the big bad behind the clone. NowRead more

    This will not be the first (or last) I disagree with my compatriots. Let’s look at the colour your details have given.

    LA where beauty is king and it has its own look and feel. Think how different it would be if it was NYC.

    Trillion dollar secret. So we know who is the big bad behind the clone.

    Now the clone, someone who is you. Who knows you etc.

    The only question I have is why would a trillion dollar industry have a cop clone?

    Otherwise I can see a cross between Blade Runner and LA Confidential.

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