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When an alien experiment crash lands in his backyard and gives him strange powers, a subdued teenager must use his new abilities and protect himself from malicious space hunters.
Just a bit of specific detail to hold it together. Why are the space hunters out to get him?
Just a bit of specific detail to hold it together. Why are the space hunters out to get him?
See lessA socially withdrawn girl creates a fantasy world while riding on the bus and falls in love with the boy who sits across from her, but he takes her places in her head she doesn?t want to face.
Good setup, but a little vague. He takes her places? In her mind, in real life? That feels like the movie and it only gets a few words at the end. Sometimes a beautiful setup is hard to throw away. But you need space for the story.
Good setup, but a little vague.
He takes her places? In her mind, in real life?
That feels like the movie and it only gets a few words at the end. Sometimes a beautiful setup is hard to throw away. But you need space for the story.
See lessWhen an agoraphobic online student meets his soulmate, he gets a job at a bar to face his fear in public, only to find out that his love is a pop star.
I can see stuff. But the last bit doesn't fit into the story. Is that a major issue. Is the relationship real? Remove the words pop star and replace them with vampire it makes no difference because you have said how her job impacts on the story. I can see what I'd write in a script based on this. BuRead more
I can see stuff. But the last bit doesn’t fit into the story. Is that a major issue. Is the relationship real?
Remove the words pop star and replace them with vampire it makes no difference because you have said how her job impacts on the story.
I can see what I’d write in a script based on this. But it’s your script. What are you writing?
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