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  1. Posted: July 9, 2016In: Drama

    Wanting to go legit a young drug dealer must do one last run to rescue her sister being held hostage by her boss; knowing she be going to be killed.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 11, 2016 at 7:10 pm

    Here's the beats. Drug boss [Doug] (low level - all these people are super low level) believes that she [Amy] is talking to police. He arranges for he to drop off a car - the run. But to someone she knows is dangerous. Doug takes her sister, to keep her safe, but we all know she is a hostage. She knRead more

    Here’s the beats.

    Drug boss [Doug] (low level – all these people are super low level) believes that she [Amy] is talking to police.
    He arranges for he to drop off a car – the run. But to someone she knows is dangerous.
    Doug takes her sister, to keep her safe, but we all know she is a hostage.
    She knows Doug is sending her to be killed.
    (lots of twists and turns).
    Sister escapes, Amy doesn’t know.
    Amy kills off the guy that was going to kill her.
    She heads back Doug to kill him.
    There is a stand off. She finds out her sister is okay.
    Amy realises that if she survives her sister will be dragged back into this life.
    Amy decides to take out Doug and die in a hail of bullets.
    A sacrifice that guarantees her sister a chance at a better life.

    thanks everyone.

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  2. Posted: July 9, 2016In: Drama

    Wanting to go legit a young drug dealer must do one last run to rescue her sister being held hostage by her boss; knowing she be going to be killed.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 10, 2016 at 9:31 am

    Thanks everyone. I have a complete script but not a complete story. ?About 30 pages, start, middle and end. But not sure where to take it. ?Even if there is enough to take it anywhere. ?This exercise has helped. ?Thanks. it has triggered ideas around reform and sacrifice.

    Thanks everyone. I have a complete script but not a complete story. ?About 30 pages, start, middle and end. But not sure where to take it. ?Even if there is enough to take it anywhere. ?This exercise has helped. ?Thanks.

    it has triggered ideas around reform and sacrifice.

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  3. Posted: July 8, 2016In: Thriller

    When a nice holiday cruise turns bloody, a detective and failed parent must take down the threat and regain his self-worth.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 9, 2016 at 2:14 pm

    There does need to be a driving factor, a goal. Getting back your self worth is an outcome not really a goal.

    There does need to be a driving factor, a goal. Getting back your self worth is an outcome not really a goal.

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