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A whimsical young woman phases into a fire realm being purged of magic and struggles balancing her world and saving the world of her dreams.
I agree with dpg be more specific in your descriptions. Plus give us some goals. ?Tells us the story. What is purging, who is doing it what must she do to save it. ?Or what is her eventual goal that will save it. A whimsical young woman must capture the xxx to defeat the xxx to save a world exists oRead more
I agree with dpg be more specific in your descriptions. Plus give us some goals. ?Tells us the story.
What is purging, who is doing it what must she do to save it. ?Or what is her eventual goal that will save it.
A whimsical young woman must capture the xxx to defeat the xxx to save a world exists only in her dreams.
Okay not your story, but you can see how it sets out the beats of the story.
See lessIn 1984, a meek high school teen is hired by the local Top 40 Station and sets out on a wild summer odyssey where he falls face first in love, and fist first into bully Bill Carter.
Most of this describes the setting. ?Plus the story appears to happen after he has set it up. ?I am guessing the girl and the bully had a previous relationship. ?I would like to know the overall goal of the story."Meeting his first love on a wild teenage odyssey, he must ..."
Most of this describes the setting. ?Plus the story appears to happen after he has set it up. ?I am guessing the girl and the bully had a previous relationship. ?I would like to know the overall goal of the story.
“Meeting his first love on a wild teenage odyssey, he must …”
See lessA tenacious art forgery expert, is dragged back in time when her brother?s diary reveals the location of stolen diamonds in a heist masterminded by her father.
Is there actual time travel? try this "location of a diamond stolen by her father." ?Then perhaps give the diamond some gravity "a diamond worth millions stolen by her father" But what does she want out of all this? ?Dorothy wanted to get home out of OZ. ?Is that her goal?
Is there actual time travel?
try this “location of a diamond stolen by her father.” ?Then perhaps give the diamond some gravity “a diamond worth millions stolen by her father”
But what does she want out of all this? ?Dorothy wanted to get home out of OZ. ?Is that her goal?
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