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  1. Posted: March 18, 2016In: Drama

    In a small Nevada town, a homeschooling teenager emerges from hiding to play varsity basketball only to be bullied when it is discovered that his mother works in the local brothel.

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    Added an answer on March 19, 2016 at 9:12 am

    Nice set up. A bit to much background (home schooled). My question is And then.....? It feels like the story is about to start. Does he change attitudes of people, does he fit back, does he seek revenge? Two hours of watching this guy getting bullied doesn't sound appealing.

    Nice set up. A bit to much background (home schooled). My question is

    And then…..?

    It feels like the story is about to start. Does he change attitudes of people, does he fit back, does he seek revenge?

    Two hours of watching this guy getting bullied doesn’t sound appealing.

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  2. Posted: March 19, 2016In: War

    The year is 1943 and the Siege of Leningrad continues to drag on. Andre does what he can to survive with his adopted family, but as the days and months drag on, hunger and constant shelling take their toll. When a dangerous incident put his friend’s life in danger, Andre must find the strength inside to take a perilous journey behind enemy lines to get help.

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    Added an answer on March 19, 2016 at 9:06 am

    During the Leningrad siege a young boy must seek behind enemy lines to get medical help to save his friend. Just the story. Any one interested will know the setting.

    During the Leningrad siege a young boy must seek behind enemy lines to get medical help to save his friend.

    Just the story. Any one interested will know the setting.

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  3. Posted: February 12, 2016In: Thriller

    Paranoid and close to breaking a drug addicted army medic must survive a plot to get him killed after he discusses a friendly fire cover up.

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    Added an answer on February 14, 2016 at 7:57 am

    Just trying to assess if I move on to cards for this story. So far in my head it looks like this. Medic doing drugs knows something that will end the careers/gaol of people in the unit. He reports it. Some stuff happen. He goes see his commander again and he says he doesn't know what he is talking aRead more

    Just trying to assess if I move on to cards for this story.

    So far in my head it looks like this. Medic doing drugs knows something that will end the careers/gaol of people in the unit. He reports it. Some stuff happen. He goes see his commander again and he says he doesn’t know what he is talking about.

    he has a friend which is like his voice of reason. Things are happening and his friend convinces him he is just drup paranoid. The audience as well is unsure. The entire story is a chain of events while they are travelling back to civilisation. Where he could report again (not sure of that bit).

    a thriller based on he may be killed any minute by a small group of people within a larger group. We don’t know who, or even if it is real. But we have to suspect it is real, even when he doubts his own sanity.

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