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When a doctor learns he has a kill-mate, a stranger that will be triggered to kill him if they cross paths, he must plot their murder, or risk a deadly encounter.
The concept of a kill mate is too unexplained for me. Why does it happen. Is it possible to clarify that? Because it doesn't pass the "just call the cops" test for me.
The concept of a kill mate is too unexplained for me. Why does it happen. Is it possible to clarify that? Because it doesn’t pass the “just call the cops” test for me.
See lessFailed documentarian roams the New Mexico mountain hunting a story until he stumbles onto a cult of women crucifying drug dealers to purge sin. He believes he’s found the story of a lifetime if he can live to tell it. Breaking Bad meets The Lottery.
Cut down on the setup to save words for later on. What is the feel of the story. Is it all action and chase? Is it a thriller so the MC has to talk his way out of it. Just live long enough rushes past all the good stuff. A documentarian finds a mountain tribe of woman that crucify drug dealers .....Read more
Cut down on the setup to save words for later on. What is the feel of the story. Is it all action and chase? Is it a thriller so the MC has to talk his way out of it.
Just live long enough rushes past all the good stuff.
A documentarian finds a mountain tribe of woman that crucify drug dealers …..
Now you have room for story meat.
See lessA sadistic killer lures young girls into his trap when they log on a mega church’s good samaritan app. A small town deputy must face his own dark past in order to stop the killer before he strikes again.
Great premise. However you gloss over the deputy. Don't leave the reader guessing. "His own dark past", was he a killer? Was he attacked? Was he a defrock preacher at the mega church? All these make for a completely different story. Tell the story. People will ask for the script to how you execute iRead more
Great premise. However you gloss over the deputy. Don’t leave the reader guessing. “His own dark past”, was he a killer? Was he attacked? Was he a defrock preacher at the mega church? All these make for a completely different story.
Tell the story. People will ask for the script to how you execute it, if they can see it.
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