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After being inspired by his late mother?s photographic work, a young man wants to leave the family farm and fully pursue being shown in a gallery, but his narcissistic and manipulative grandfather will do anything to keep him from leaving the legacy.
How does grandpa do that. ?There is a lot of colour around the characters but I can't understand the conflict. Opposing goals for sure, but I am left to assume the conflict. ?Give me a few beats in a comment. We can see from that what we can suggest.
How does grandpa do that. ?There is a lot of colour around the characters but I can’t understand the conflict. Opposing goals for sure, but I am left to assume the conflict. ?Give me a few beats in a comment. We can see from that what we can suggest.
See lessParanoid and close to breaking a drug addicted army medic must survive a plot to get him killed after he discusses a friendly fire cover up.
Discusses could be Discovers.
Discusses could be Discovers.
See lessA young mechanic discovers the spaceship she stole from dry dock is capable of ending the civil war between organic and synthetic life forms, but first she must convince the on-board AI to choose a side.
I would drop the dry dock, where she stole the ship isn't important to the story. A Civil War is normally between the same sort of people. ?So make it just a war, less words, less confusion. Why she needs to convince the ship to could be explained a little now that you have room. ?I see nothing wronRead more
I would drop the dry dock, where she stole the ship isn’t important to the story.
A Civil War is normally between the same sort of people. ?So make it just a war, less words, less confusion.
Why she needs to convince the ship to could be explained a little now that you have room. ?I see nothing wrong with a story being based around a person trying to convince a machine to make a decision. ?A good argument can be a great story.
So edit and put the new version as a comment. Interested in seeing it.
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