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the seven deadly sins come to earth in human form. Than decide to compete for the soul of a novice priest with his destruction being the ultimate prize.
I like that a lot. Especially the detail around the priest. I want it to be a young priest. Someone fully of hope and not yet jaded or disillusioned by people. Someone that when corrupted will seem a greater lose. Bit like a puppy compared to a dog.
I like that a lot. Especially the detail around the priest. I want it to be a young priest. Someone fully of hope and not yet jaded or disillusioned by people. Someone that when corrupted will seem a greater lose. Bit like a puppy compared to a dog.
See lessthe seven deadly sins come to earth in human form. Than decide to compete for the soul of a novice priest with his destruction being the ultimate prize.
His destruction refers to the destruction of his soul by making cross a point he thought he would never cross. A point of no return, based on their particular sin. Spelling and me, not the best of friends. Dyslexic due to brain injury, I must be the only person on earth that likes autocorrect. KeepRead more
His destruction refers to the destruction of his soul by making cross a point he thought he would never cross. A point of no return, based on their particular sin.
Spelling and me, not the best of friends. Dyslexic due to brain injury, I must be the only person on earth that likes autocorrect. Keep pulling me up on it, stops me from becoming lazy.
Thanks for the feedback.
See lessthe seven deadly sins come to earth in human form. Than decide to compete for the soul of a novice priest with his destruction being the ultimate prize.
He isn't really. He is a bit like a prize. We see his change, but we aren't focused on his choices. He doesn't have any agency in the story. He is a play thing I am hoping we feel sadness for him. But we don't track his actions. Thanks for the hint. Not sure how to get my idea a cross clearly.
He isn’t really. He is a bit like a prize. We see his change, but we aren’t focused on his choices. He doesn’t have any agency in the story. He is a play thing I am hoping we feel sadness for him. But we don’t track his actions.
Thanks for the hint. Not sure how to get my idea a cross clearly.
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