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A religious zealot grows the devil in the lab, using him to scare people back to the church, only to loose control of his creation.
I don't mind your line. The only thing that rubs for me is the devil created in a lab. That may work in the script but raises a huge question in the logline. Perhaps just the outcome of the lab work. "A religious zealot bring the devil back to earth to..." Explain how in the script. The lab angle doRead more
I don’t mind your line. The only thing that rubs for me is the devil created in a lab. That may work in the script but raises a huge question in the logline.
Perhaps just the outcome of the lab work. “A religious zealot bring the devil back to earth to…”
Explain how in the script. The lab angle doesn’t move the story along.
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A young man, is physiologically altered by a prehistoric energy becoming humankind?s sole savior when a diabolical alien race, seeking the power arrives to blow up the Earth.
A young man, is physiologically altered by a prehistoric energy becoming humankind?s sole savior when a diabolical alien race, seeking the power arrives to blow up the Earth.
See lessAn ordinary young man, is forced to become humankind?s sole savior when a diabolical alien race, wants to blow up the Earth.
You could do a mix of both. You could drop "ordinary" from his discription, it is assumed that people are ordinary unless it is stated they are special. "An ancient power" is enough. Add colour with story elements not detail of things that don't move action along. Look forward to seeing more.
You could do a mix of both. You could drop “ordinary” from his discription, it is assumed that people are ordinary unless it is stated they are special. “An ancient power” is enough.
Add colour with story elements not detail of things that don’t move action along.
Look forward to seeing more.
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