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  1. Posted: June 2, 2015In: Public

    A guy named Max gets rejected by a girl named Alaska. Alaska has become notorious for dating multiple guys and being a bitch to everybody because she has a troubled past involving her parents abandoning in a shopping mall which some people believe is bogus and then Max goes into a downward spiral and starts having trouble with trusting people and having insecurities he never used to have.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on June 2, 2015 at 9:40 pm

    All stories have a start a middle and an end. So tell us how your characters move through that. What does Max want? Why can't he have it? What is he willing to do? Max is desperate to (fill in) but he can't (insert obstacle) so he must (action) to achieve is goal. Here is Titanic for instance. An soRead more

    All stories have a start a middle and an end. So tell us how your characters move through that.

    What does Max want? Why can’t he have it? What is he willing to do?

    Max is desperate to (fill in) but he can’t (insert obstacle) so he must (action) to achieve is goal.

    Here is Titanic for instance.

    An socialist is desperate to escape her controlling fianc? and falls in love with a penny less artist on Titanic.

    Tell us the story not the people. I am current rewriting (draft – call it what you like), the story is remaining but I am changing a character drastically as well as the period the events happen over. The logline will not change.

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  2. Posted: May 28, 2015In: Public

    After a young talented street musician who suffers from stage fright is moving to New York City and wanting to realize his dream of a breakthrough as a band with his brother, he falls into the hands of a greedy music producer who promises the big deal, but forces him to decide between a successful career as a solo artist or an unknown band life with his brother.

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    Added an answer on May 31, 2015 at 9:42 am

    Performing with his brother a street performer is given a chance at the big time by a producer, but only if he dumps his brother.

    Performing with his brother a street performer is given a chance at the big time by a producer, but only if he dumps his brother.

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  3. Posted: May 28, 2015In: Public

    When the bodyless talking brains of the most brilliant scientists want to leave the country, their simple minded transporter must learn to use his head to pass the frontier before the government or the resistance get their hands on them.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 30, 2015 at 8:33 pm

    "That's it. The brain to talk ends up in a butter sauce". Arguing with disembodied voices could be hilarious.

    “That’s it. The brain to talk ends up in a butter sauce”. Arguing with disembodied voices could be hilarious.

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