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A profiling expert searchers for the mastermind behind her families tragic past, and finds herself in the twisted world of a group of disturbed psychologists who have been awaiting her arrival.
Left the R off profiler. iPad sorry.
Left the R off profiler. iPad sorry.
See lessA profiling expert searchers for the mastermind behind her families tragic past, and finds herself in the twisted world of a group of disturbed psychologists who have been awaiting her arrival.
Tragic past is a little vague. Twisted and Disturbed in the same sentence feels wrong. One makes the other happen, a twisted world has disturbed people in it. You need to make this point, but you need to do it more elegantly. Why would the expert know or assume there is a mastermind? Is that the staRead more
Tragic past is a little vague. Twisted and Disturbed in the same sentence feels wrong. One makes the other happen, a twisted world has disturbed people in it. You need to make this point, but you need to do it more elegantly.
Why would the expert know or assume there is a mastermind? Is that the start of your story?
“After learning a tragedy was no accident, a profile sets out to bring the mastermind to justice only to find a network of disturb psychologists willing to do anything to stop him”.
Not rewriting your story. Just an example from what I am guessing your story is.
See lessA boy who spent all his life believing he was weak, suddenly discovers that there is something, something special about himself. He never understood until he fell 1200 feet off a mountain during a trek; and survived without a scratch.
What does he do with his super powers? What stops him? What must he overcome to reach his ultimate goal? That is the story. You have an interesting marketing line.
What does he do with his super powers? What stops him? What must he overcome to reach his ultimate goal?
That is the story. You have an interesting marketing line.
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