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When a stubborn secret agent wakes up in Eastern Europe trapped in the body of a reclusive female English teacher, the unlikely duo must set their differences aside to find the agent’s body before his former government employers, who want him dead, do.
I am just a little confused with tentative. I don't get any character from that word. People are normally tentative in a situation or scenario or taking an action. Not really a way of describing an entire personality. I think it raises more questions than it answers. You want the reader to questionRead more
I am just a little confused with tentative. I don’t get any character from that word. People are normally tentative in a situation or scenario or taking an action. Not really a way of describing an entire personality.
I think it raises more questions than it answers. You want the reader to question how you achieve the outcomes you outline. Not question what you are trying to say. I think that word lets down a good premise.
See lessWhen a stubborn secret agent wakes up in Eastern Europe trapped in the body of a reclusive female English teacher, the unlikely duo must set their differences aside to find the agent’s body before his former government employers, who want him dead, do.
I am just a little confused with tentative. I don't get any character from that word. People are normally tentative in a situation or scenario or taking an action. Not really a way of describing an entire personality. I think it raises more questions than it answers. You want the reader to questionRead more
I am just a little confused with tentative. I don’t get any character from that word. People are normally tentative in a situation or scenario or taking an action. Not really a way of describing an entire personality.
I think it raises more questions than it answers. You want the reader to question how you achieve the outcomes you outline. Not question what you are trying to say. I think that word lets down a good premise.
See lessWhen a mass murder shuts down production on an Arctic oil rig, an ambitious young oil exec is charged with managing the crisis only to be thrust into a battle for survival as an ancient fungus co-opts the first responders turning them into violent spore spreading rapists.
That's completely different to the first version. That reads very sinister. The first version was a bit like a 60's "carry on" movie. This is only word choice and comes down to writing style. I personally would use infects instead of co-opts, I would use massacre instead of mass murder, I think it iRead more
That’s completely different to the first version. That reads very sinister. The first version was a bit like a 60’s “carry on” movie. This is only word choice and comes down to writing style. I personally would use infects instead of co-opts, I would use massacre instead of mass murder, I think it implies no survivors.
The other lines were not BAD, but this the GOOD. Well done.
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