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A playboy Hollywood producer must embark on a roadtrip from Hell with his long lost rebellious son. What will happen when these opposites are forced to attract.
The only thing I can add is don't state the question you hope the reader has in their mind. It is heavy hand and makes your writing feel like it has failed to prompt any sort of question.
The only thing I can add is don’t state the question you hope the reader has in their mind. It is heavy hand and makes your writing feel like it has failed to prompt any sort of question.
See lessA playboy Hollywood producer must embark on a roadtrip from Hell with his long lost rebellious son. What will happen when these opposites are forced to attract.
The only thing I can add is don't state the question you hope the reader has in their mind. It is heavy hand and makes your writing feel like it has failed to prompt any sort of question.
The only thing I can add is don’t state the question you hope the reader has in their mind. It is heavy hand and makes your writing feel like it has failed to prompt any sort of question.
See lessIan Hemlock is swept away to a magical land after he falls out of an attic window and embarks on a quest to find a slipper for a dead girl who can help him find his missing father.
Replace "and" with "where he". "And" makes it feel like two unrelated events. If you put the fall first it makes the events chronological which is better. Finally I don't think I learned anything knowing his name, "old man", "young man" or "teenager" puts an image in my head. Well done. It seems toRead more
Replace “and” with “where he”. “And” makes it feel like two unrelated events. If you put the fall first it makes the events chronological which is better. Finally I don’t think I learned anything knowing his name, “old man”, “young man” or “teenager” puts an image in my head.
Well done.
It seems to be a complete concept. I hope this helps.
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