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The first female cadet at Norton Military Institute knew plebe year would be a challenge, but she never figured it would include surviving a kidnapping during which she?s very nearly murdered and then putting her life on the line to thwart an assassination plot by Cuban-Americans outraged by the President?s initiative to normalize relations with Cuba.
I think the entire fact that she is a first year is not needed. A military cadet must escape her captors and prevent them from assassinating the President of the United States. Cuba may be a huge part of your story so add that in. A military cadet must escape her Cuban-American captors and prevent tRead more
I think the entire fact that she is a first year is not needed.
A military cadet must escape her captors and prevent them from assassinating the President of the United States.
Cuba may be a huge part of your story so add that in.
A military cadet must escape her Cuban-American captors and prevent them from assassinating the President of the United States.
You will want to make it as quick and punchy as possible as it is an action story at heart. Everything else save for the Synopsis.
See lessIn Barrow, Alaska, an up-and-coming oil executive struggles with damage control in the aftermath of a bizarre incident on a drilling barge that kills most of its crew, but when a primordial fungus brought up from under the ice begins to infect the local hospital staff, turning them into voracious sex fiends out to inject their spores, he abandons saving his career and fights to save his life.
Combine some facts. It will make it read quicker. Something like "after an accident on a rig kills the crew and release a fungus that infects a local hospital...". Plus Barlow is an unneeded fact. Unless it is super important to the story, like Paris or New York, drop it. Keep rewriting and refiningRead more
Combine some facts. It will make it read quicker. Something like “after an accident on a rig kills the crew and release a fungus that infects a local hospital…”. Plus Barlow is an unneeded fact. Unless it is super important to the story, like Paris or New York, drop it. Keep rewriting and refining it. Make it read quick, too much detail can bog it down. Only hit the big beats.
See lessIn Barrow, Alaska, an up-and-coming oil executive struggles with damage control in the aftermath of a bizarre incident on a drilling barge that kills most of its crew, but when a primordial fungus brought up from under the ice begins to infect the local hospital staff, turning them into voracious sex fiends out to inject their spores, he abandons saving his career and fights to save his life.
Combine some facts. It will make it read quicker. Something like "after an accident on a rig kills the crew and release a fungus that infects a local hospital...". Plus Barlow is an unneeded fact. Unless it is super important to the story, like Paris or New York, drop it. Keep rewriting and refiningRead more
Combine some facts. It will make it read quicker. Something like “after an accident on a rig kills the crew and release a fungus that infects a local hospital…”. Plus Barlow is an unneeded fact. Unless it is super important to the story, like Paris or New York, drop it. Keep rewriting and refining it. Make it read quick, too much detail can bog it down. Only hit the big beats.
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