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On a remote maple farm, an ethereal encounter brings cryptic visions to a neglected teenager determined to engineer a new vacuum system that will revolutionize maple production.
Perhaps focus on one thing. " neglected" is the teen hoping to get more recognition? Why determined with the system? These may be great points, but they don't give the story movement. You will find the line. I had a 62 word logline which the group helped focus. Changed the entire topic and made it gRead more
Perhaps focus on one thing. ” neglected” is the teen hoping to get more recognition? Why determined with the system? These may be great points, but they don’t give the story movement. You will find the line. I had a 62 word logline which the group helped focus. Changed the entire topic and made it great and only 30 words. Three production companies have looked at it now. None from the original long line.
See lessOn a remote maple farm, an ethereal encounter brings cryptic visions to a neglected teenager determined to engineer a new vacuum system that will revolutionize maple production.
Perhaps focus on one thing. " neglected" is the teen hoping to get more recognition? Why determined with the system? These may be great points, but they don't give the story movement. You will find the line. I had a 62 word logline which the group helped focus. Changed the entire topic and made it gRead more
Perhaps focus on one thing. ” neglected” is the teen hoping to get more recognition? Why determined with the system? These may be great points, but they don’t give the story movement. You will find the line. I had a 62 word logline which the group helped focus. Changed the entire topic and made it great and only 30 words. Three production companies have looked at it now. None from the original long line.
See lessWhen a virtuous father sexually connect with his son?s voyeuristic girlfriend, a sinful desire will put his beloved family and loving wife on stake, for discovering of submissive sex.
The girlfriend likes to watch. How does that trigger anything in dad? Needs an incident and goal. They are in the story, the logline needs them.
The girlfriend likes to watch. How does that trigger anything in dad? Needs an incident and goal. They are in the story, the logline needs them.
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