1. Posted: February 5, 2015In:

    When a virtuous father sexually connect with his son?s voyeuristic girlfriend, a sinful desire will put his beloved family and loving wife on stake, for discovering of submissive sex.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    The girlfriend likes to watch. How does that trigger anything in dad? Needs an incident and goal. They are in the story, the logline needs them.

    The girlfriend likes to watch. How does that trigger anything in dad? Needs an incident and goal. They are in the story, the logline needs them.

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  2. Posted: February 6, 2015In:

    Sera is the story of a young and ignorant prince who is forced to abandon his love for a girl when he must assume the throne. As his reign and age grow old and the kingdom falls into ruin, he must make a choice between power or love.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    Start at the king. An old king must choose between his crumbling Kingdom and the woman he was forced to abandon to take the throne. This is a skeleton, you know your story. Build from one point.

    Start at the king.

    An old king must choose between his crumbling Kingdom and the woman he was forced to abandon to take the throne.

    This is a skeleton, you know your story. Build from one point.

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  3. Posted: February 6, 2015In:

    Sera is the story of a young and ignorant prince who is forced to abandon his love for a girl when he must assume the throne. As his reign and age grow old and the kingdom falls into ruin, he must make a choice between power or love.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    Start at the king. An old king must choose between his crumbling Kingdom and the woman he was forced to abandon to take the throne. This is a skeleton, you know your story. Build from one point.

    Start at the king.

    An old king must choose between his crumbling Kingdom and the woman he was forced to abandon to take the throne.

    This is a skeleton, you know your story. Build from one point.

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