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When a Craigslist-swinging-meetup goes bad and the voyeruist find herself trapped with a serial killer, she must out-clever the killer before times-up as gagged-bate for the killer?s next victim.
I am finding the gagged bait a stumbling block. Being held by a serial killer "bond and gagged" is a given. Also her reason turning up. Swinging is enough to set the scene, that she likes to watch is unneeded detail at this point in time. taking this out gives the line a pace which I think would beRead more
I am finding the gagged bait a stumbling block. Being held by a serial killer “bond and gagged” is a given. Also her reason turning up. Swinging is enough to set the scene, that she likes to watch is unneeded detail at this point in time. taking this out gives the line a pace which I think would be reflected in the story.
See lessWhen a Craigslist-swinging-meetup goes bad and the voyeruist find herself trapped with a serial killer, she must out-clever the killer before times-up as gagged-bate for the killer?s next victim.
I am finding the gagged bait a stumbling block. Being held by a serial killer "bond and gagged" is a given. Also her reason turning up. Swinging is enough to set the scene, that she likes to watch is unneeded detail at this point in time. taking this out gives the line a pace which I think would beRead more
I am finding the gagged bait a stumbling block. Being held by a serial killer “bond and gagged” is a given. Also her reason turning up. Swinging is enough to set the scene, that she likes to watch is unneeded detail at this point in time. taking this out gives the line a pace which I think would be reflected in the story.
See lessIn a post apocalyptic world a teenage girl takes refuge in a hidden valley after loosing her parents trying to escape the pandemic and reach quarantine. Discovered by a man that could lead her to safety, he instead betrays her. He takes over her camp forcing her to fight not only a man that is bigger, stronger and armed, but also the approaching winter.
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