1. Posted: January 30, 2015In:

    In a post apocalyptic world a teenage girl takes refuge in a hidden valley after loosing her parents trying to escape the pandemic and reach quarantine. Discovered by a man that could lead her to safety, he instead betrays her. He takes over her camp forcing her to fight not only a man that is bigger, stronger and armed, but also the approaching winter.

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  2. Posted: January 23, 2015In:

    To cleanse her dead son’s soul, a once-sceptical occult historian must force a former kung fu master cop to recreate a ritual he witnessed as a child. (FOR MEETUP REVIEW)

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    The only thing that jumped out of me is "former Kung Fu master Cop". Do we need to know that he was a cop? The combination seems strange.

    The only thing that jumped out of me is “former Kung Fu master Cop”. Do we need to know that he was a cop? The combination seems strange.

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  3. Posted: January 23, 2015In:

    To cleanse her dead son’s soul, a once-sceptical occult historian must force a former kung fu master cop to recreate a ritual he witnessed as a child. (FOR MEETUP REVIEW)

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    The only thing that jumped out of me is "former Kung Fu master Cop". Do we need to know that he was a cop? The combination seems strange.

    The only thing that jumped out of me is “former Kung Fu master Cop”. Do we need to know that he was a cop? The combination seems strange.

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