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In a post apocalyptic world a teenage girl takes refuge in a hidden valley after loosing her parents trying to escape the pandemic and reach quarantine. Discovered by a man that could lead her to safety, he instead betrays her. He takes over her camp forcing her to fight not only a man that is bigger, stronger and armed, but also the approaching winter.
Here is what I think works. After learning of other survivors of an apocalyptic pandemic, a teenage girl desperate to find them must fight a brutal man who has taken what she has to secure his own survival.
Here is what I think works.
After learning of other survivors of an apocalyptic pandemic, a teenage girl desperate to find them must fight a brutal man who has taken what she has to secure his own survival.
See lessIn a post apocalyptic world a teenage girl takes refuge in a hidden valley after loosing her parents trying to escape the pandemic and reach quarantine. Discovered by a man that could lead her to safety, he instead betrays her. He takes over her camp forcing her to fight not only a man that is bigger, stronger and armed, but also the approaching winter.
Very good, thanks gilgamesh. There are plenty at stake, but I am not getting them across. Throwing more poorly expressed stakes into the story I don't believe would make for a better story. Maslow's Hierarchy of needs puts survival as the most base human need. That is what the point of the story is.Read more
Very good, thanks gilgamesh. There are plenty at stake, but I am not getting them across. Throwing more poorly expressed stakes into the story I don’t believe would make for a better story. Maslow’s Hierarchy of needs puts survival as the most base human need. That is what the point of the story is. How far can you push someone before they sink to your level and are willing to kill.
See lessIn a post apocalyptic world a teenage girl takes refuge in a hidden valley after loosing her parents trying to escape the pandemic and reach quarantine. Discovered by a man that could lead her to safety, he instead betrays her. He takes over her camp forcing her to fight not only a man that is bigger, stronger and armed, but also the approaching winter.
Very good, thanks gilgamesh. There are plenty at stake, but I am not getting them across. Throwing more poorly expressed stakes into the story I don't believe would make for a better story. Maslow's Hierarchy of needs puts survival as the most base human need. That is what the point of the story is.Read more
Very good, thanks gilgamesh. There are plenty at stake, but I am not getting them across. Throwing more poorly expressed stakes into the story I don’t believe would make for a better story. Maslow’s Hierarchy of needs puts survival as the most base human need. That is what the point of the story is. How far can you push someone before they sink to your level and are willing to kill.
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