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In a post apocalyptic world a teenage girl takes refuge in a hidden valley after loosing her parents trying to escape the pandemic and reach quarantine. Discovered by a man that could lead her to safety, he instead betrays her. He takes over her camp forcing her to fight not only a man that is bigger, stronger and armed, but also the approaching winter.
I see where you are heading. Think "Terminator", this guy is unrelenting. She has no where to go, since the world has pretty much ended. She barely survives, then her camp is taken over. She escapes nearly naked and winter is coming. She is a gentle person by nature. She is forced to fight back or dRead more
I see where you are heading. Think “Terminator”, this guy is unrelenting. She has no where to go, since the world has pretty much ended. She barely survives, then her camp is taken over. She escapes nearly naked and winter is coming. She is a gentle person by nature. She is forced to fight back or die. Her stakes are her life, the ticking clock is the coming winter and the lack of resources. She is in a valley, no shops to ransack.
See lessIn a post apocalyptic world a teenage girl takes refuge in a hidden valley after loosing her parents trying to escape the pandemic and reach quarantine. Discovered by a man that could lead her to safety, he instead betrays her. He takes over her camp forcing her to fight not only a man that is bigger, stronger and armed, but also the approaching winter.
I see where you are heading. Think "Terminator", this guy is unrelenting. She has no where to go, since the world has pretty much ended. She barely survives, then her camp is taken over. She escapes nearly naked and winter is coming. She is a gentle person by nature. She is forced to fight back or dRead more
I see where you are heading. Think “Terminator”, this guy is unrelenting. She has no where to go, since the world has pretty much ended. She barely survives, then her camp is taken over. She escapes nearly naked and winter is coming. She is a gentle person by nature. She is forced to fight back or die. Her stakes are her life, the ticking clock is the coming winter and the lack of resources. She is in a valley, no shops to ransack.
See lessIn a post apocalyptic world a teenage girl takes refuge in a hidden valley after loosing her parents trying to escape the pandemic and reach quarantine. Discovered by a man that could lead her to safety, he instead betrays her. He takes over her camp forcing her to fight not only a man that is bigger, stronger and armed, but also the approaching winter.
It is wordy. The reason she cares about the camp is that in a In a post apocalyptic world there is nothing else. If someone takes your stuff you die. Need to get that across. I thought of putting "wants", but I am leaning towards action based description. The last bit is badly written the more I thiRead more
It is wordy. The reason she cares about the camp is that in a In a post apocalyptic world there is nothing else. If someone takes your stuff you die. Need to get that across.
I thought of putting “wants”, but I am leaning towards action based description. The last bit is badly written the more I think about it.
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