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A woman finds a phone connected to the future, she is tasked by people to do a series of increasingly extreme tasks in an attempt to fix their present, or it may be her latest bout of mental illness.
Yeah. I think it is a “bridge to far” moment. It is like when you see a logline, “a man desperate to reunite with his estranged daughter after he find he has cancer, while saving the world from aliens” (Aliens WTF). I think the mental illness is in the story, but not a major part. I see it as a reasRead more
Yeah. I think it is a “bridge to far” moment. It is like when you see a logline, “a man desperate to reunite with his estranged daughter after he find he has cancer, while saving the world from aliens” (Aliens WTF).
I think the mental illness is in the story, but not a major part. I see it as a reason she keeps it to herself. She knows people will think she is crazy. I don’t know the entire story in my head yet. Or even how I will depict the change her actions have in the future.
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See lessA priest kidnaps an atheist writer and tortures him until he believes in God or one of them dies in the process.
A priest kidnaps an atheist writer and tortures him in an attempt to make him believe in god. the last little bit feels like a bridge to far. This is enough of a story for me. Adding the extra muddies the line. Is it about a fight to the death type thriller, or is it an exploration of people going tRead more
A priest kidnaps an atheist writer and tortures him in an attempt to make him believe in god.
the last little bit feels like a bridge to far. This is enough of a story for me. Adding the extra muddies the line. Is it about a fight to the death type thriller, or is it an exploration of people going to extremes and losing sight of reality.
See lessWhen the leader of the Assassination Cartel’s grandson is killed during a raid authorized by the American President, the semi-retired leader invokes an ancient vengeance that will wipe out the president’s seed from the earth
I agree with Rich. The other thing the story is a bit vague. Of course there is revenge. But if you are going to tell us, give us some detail. "..it triggers an ancient form of retribution that makes him wish he never ordered the raid" That is a lot of words to say revenge. Save those words and giveRead more
I agree with Rich. The other thing the story is a bit vague. Of course there is revenge. But if you are going to tell us, give us some detail.
“..it triggers an ancient form of retribution that makes him wish he never ordered the raid”
That is a lot of words to say revenge. Save those words and give us meat on the bones that will make us hungry for more.
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