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  1. Posted: December 20, 2020In: Drama

    A disenfranchised (unstable) taxi driver seeks violent justice for passengers he feels have been wronged. He is pursued by a detective who is willing to cross the line to bring him to justice.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Replied to answer on December 22, 2020 at 12:10 pm

    Nice. It may end up that way. The cat and mouse would imply that he is doing things to outsmart the police. I think of it (so far in my head) as two stories. Both heading for the same outcome (probably) the death of the driver.

    Nice. It may end up that way. The cat and mouse would imply that he is doing things to outsmart the police. I think of it (so far in my head) as two stories. Both heading for the same outcome (probably) the death of the driver.

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  2. Posted: December 20, 2020In: Drama

    A disenfranchised (unstable) taxi driver seeks violent justice for passengers he feels have been wronged. He is pursued by a detective who is willing to cross the line to bring him to justice.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Replied to answer on December 22, 2020 at 12:07 pm

    Hi Richiev, I am thinking an indie thriller. I would be aming for an almost horror feel. Still formulating an arc. Or in this case I think it is intertwining arcs. I would imagine the driver starts out doing something that the audience is "yep, he deserved it". As it progresses, he is getting less jRead more

    Hi Richiev,

    I am thinking an indie thriller. I would be aming for an almost horror feel. Still formulating an arc. Or in this case I think it is intertwining arcs. I would imagine the driver starts out doing something that the audience is “yep, he deserved it”. As it progresses, he is getting less justified. The cop would then begin to get more of the audience’s support.

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  3. Posted: December 19, 2020In: SciFi

    The U.S. govt., along with Nasa, devise a plot to relocate people of color to inhabit the moon; against their will!

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on December 20, 2020 at 11:59 am

    You can’t give too much info away. You just can’t. It is impossible. Because you and I could start with the same logline and within a day our stories would be completely different. You need to tell the story through someone’s eyes. Which is the protagonist comment. US Govt and NASA is doubling up.

    You can’t give too much info away. You just can’t. It is impossible. Because you and I could start with the same logline and within a day our stories would be completely different.

    You need to tell the story through someone’s eyes. Which is the protagonist comment.

    US Govt and NASA is doubling up.

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