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  1. Posted: July 29, 2013In: Public

    A vengeful hacktivist whose job it is to eliminate all traces of the internet, attempts to take down the very government that imprisoned his freedom.

    danielarmour2012
    Added an answer on July 30, 2013 at 7:50 am

    Hi Tor, I think there might be a strong idea here but it needs to be simpified because, as of right now, it's a little confusing.

    Hi Tor,

    I think there might be a strong idea here but it needs to be simpified because, as of right now, it’s a little confusing.

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  2. Posted: July 29, 2013In: Public

    A group of high school kids discover how to time travel, but fail to recognize the potential consequences.

    danielarmour2012
    Added an answer on July 30, 2013 at 7:48 am

    There's an interesting idea here but it needs a main character and it needs to be more specific.

    There’s an interesting idea here but it needs a main character and it needs to be more specific.

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  3. Posted: July 28, 2013In: Public

    When the objects, acting in concert worldwide, start refusing to help with bad actions for no apparent reason, it becomes the hell on earth for bad people but not yet heaven for the others. Will we be able to understand what things want to teach us: a lesson in humanity?

    danielarmour2012
    Added an answer on July 30, 2013 at 6:46 am

    It's certainly shorter but it's still pretty vague. There needs to be a main character there, an inciting incident and a concrete goal to achieve or action to prevent.

    It’s certainly shorter but it’s still pretty vague. There needs to be a main character there, an inciting incident and a concrete goal to achieve or action to prevent.

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