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  1. Posted: July 29, 2013In: Public

    Discovering they're demigoddesses and guardians of four mystical keys, a geeky push over, her estranged little sister, her former high school bully and her best frienemy must unite against a evil fallen goddess seeking to use the keys to reclaim her true power and enslave the planet.

    danielarmour2012
    Added an answer on July 30, 2013 at 6:43 am

    Hi jamesmichael & andrewclau. Both of your tips are very helpful! I was thinking of going with something like this: Bestowed with the power of ancient gods, a geeky push over and her three friends must stop an evil goddess from wreaking havoc on the planet. Also, andrewclau, it's the premise forRead more

    Hi jamesmichael & andrewclau. Both of your tips are very helpful! I was thinking of going with something like this:

    Bestowed with the power of ancient gods, a geeky push over and her three friends must stop an evil goddess from wreaking havoc on the planet.

    Also, andrewclau, it’s the premise for a web series I’m developing.

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  2. Posted: July 23, 2013In: Public

    A cop must track down a violent criminal loose in the crime free society of 2050 and learns something about the killer that is set to change her and this utopian society. Psychological thriller.

    danielarmour2012
    Added an answer on July 29, 2013 at 12:37 am

    There's definitely a strong story here, I think it just needs a character flaw/sense of irony for the main character to truly work. Other than that, great work!

    There’s definitely a strong story here, I think it just needs a character flaw/sense of irony for the main character to truly work. Other than that, great work!

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  3. Posted: July 26, 2013In: Public

    A cop turned writer goes in search of his friend who?s wife was murdered twenty years back to find out if his friend took his revenge or not… which in turn helps him realize his own love that he had held for twenty years.

    danielarmour2012
    Added an answer on July 28, 2013 at 11:55 pm

    Hi Olhiveeran. I see a great idea in here but it needs to be simplified. Maybe the Cop/Writer and the friend, who were in love with the wife, go in search of her killer together but the main character starts to suspect that his friend isn't being as honest as he perceived. It isn't the most originalRead more

    Hi Olhiveeran. I see a great idea in here but it needs to be simplified. Maybe the Cop/Writer and the friend, who were in love with the wife, go in search of her killer together but the main character starts to suspect that his friend isn’t being as honest as he perceived. It isn’t the most original idea but it might help get the ball rolling.

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