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When her daughter is taken by nanobot creatures, an irresponsible scientist mother must venture beyond the city's walls and find the creature's lair to get her back.
Hi Andrewclau. I think the relationship with the daughter and mother should be highlighted a little more. They could be estranged and the mother has to learn more about her daughter to track her down. Or, the mother and daughter could work together to stop the robots, which forces them to confront tRead more
Hi Andrewclau. I think the relationship with the daughter and mother should be highlighted a little more. They could be estranged and the mother has to learn more about her daughter to track her down. Or, the mother and daughter could work together to stop the robots, which forces them to confront their past and why they’re estranged.
See lessWhen the objects, acting in concert worldwide, start refusing to help with bad actions for no apparent reason, it becomes the hell on earth for bad people but not yet heaven for the others. Will we be able to understand what things want to teach us: a lesson in humanity?
Hi Jean-Marie. I think the first problem with this logline is that it's too vague. While you can't give away every detail, it doesn't say much other than something is happening. Also, in that regard, it doesn't even commit to a catalyst for the event. The second problem with this logline is that itRead more
Hi Jean-Marie. I think the first problem with this logline is that it’s too vague. While you can’t give away every detail, it doesn’t say much other than something is happening. Also, in that regard, it doesn’t even commit to a catalyst for the event. The second problem with this logline is that it doesn’t have a particular character to follow. It needs one person that this story is about and how it relates to them. An even better idea would be to have a sense of irony to that character being placed in the story; like he or she is a push over that has to lead people.
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