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While on an extermination mission, Claudia finds her 8 yr old brother orphaned and marked for death. She defects to get him to a rumored safe haven if they can make it? in time. Big thanks to Cynosurer for the feedback
"Extermination mission" makes Claudia sound like the bad guy. In fact, she is the bad guy! Presumably in the screenplay, she realises the error of her ways, but since you won't have room for that in the logline, could you make her mission sound more sympathetic?
“Extermination mission” makes Claudia sound like the bad guy. In fact, she is the bad guy! Presumably in the screenplay, she realises the error of her ways, but since you won’t have room for that in the logline, could you make her mission sound more sympathetic?
See less4 high school students find themselves in three different time periods: one is in the past, two are in the present and the last is trapped in the future.
Okay, so clearly the house is a major element. So you probably need to reflect that in the logline - "four students become trapped in the same house, but in different time periods" or something better than that. You could give more clues to tone, too. This could be anything from violent horror to tiRead more
Okay, so clearly the house is a major element. So you probably need to reflect that in the logline – “four students become trapped in the same house, but in different time periods” or something better than that.
You could give more clues to tone, too. This could be anything from violent horror to time-travel comedy at the moment. What’s at stake? What’s the key to getting back together?
See lessA comedy double act drive to Edinburgh to perform one final show, blissfully unaware of the imminent apocalypse.
What I'd like to know is whether the two elements - comedy double act and the apocalypse - are connected. Are they the only people who can stop the apocalypse, or is this a "Seeking A Friend For The End Of The World" -type movie where the world's actually going to end? Obviously that makes a big difRead more
What I’d like to know is whether the two elements – comedy double act and the apocalypse – are connected. Are they the only people who can stop the apocalypse, or is this a “Seeking A Friend For The End Of The World” -type movie where the world’s actually going to end? Obviously that makes a big difference to the style and tone of the movie.
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