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  1. Posted: April 11, 2021In: Romance

    An anthology of eleven short stories about people discovering love and romance in the Big Apple.

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    Added an answer on April 12, 2021 at 10:42 am

    I do agree that, based on the logline, it is kind of difficult to say anything else other than the fact that they are love stories. What makes them special or unique from the other love stories? It would be nice to know something about them.

    I do agree that, based on the logline, it is kind of difficult to say anything else other than the fact that they are love stories. What makes them special or unique from the other love stories? It would be nice to know something about them.

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  2. Posted: April 11, 2021In: Fantasy

    Misopedist Captain James Hook must confront his tortured past when he is forced to rescue a group of children held hostage by the demon boy, Peter Pan.

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    Thanks, Richiev! I thought it would be a nice spin to have Captain Hook be the "hero" and Peter Pan (and Tinkerbell) be the villain for a change. In this story, Captain Hook was actually a "Lost Boy" who barely escaped the horrors of Neverland and has lived as a secluded hermit, his lost arm, a grimRead more

    Thanks, Richiev! I thought it would be a nice spin to have Captain Hook be the “hero” and Peter Pan (and Tinkerbell) be the villain for a change. In this story, Captain Hook was actually a “Lost Boy” who barely escaped the horrors of Neverland and has lived as a secluded hermit, his lost arm, a grim reminder of the horrors he faced.

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  3. Posted: March 28, 2020In: Thriller

    On the verge of madness, a grieving man attacks his stubborn stepchild, chasing him onto private property, but when the psychotic landowner captures them he must learn to accept and work together with the boy to escape before they are both killed.

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    Added an answer on March 29, 2020 at 11:02 am

    I assume the grieving man's madness is due to the fact he has to care for his stepchild? Here is another version of the logline you may want to consider: "A quick-tempered man and his stubborn stepchild must set aside their differences to escape when they find themselves being held hostage inside aRead more

    I assume the grieving man’s madness is due to the fact he has to care for his stepchild?

    Here is another version of the logline you may want to consider:

    “A quick-tempered man and his stubborn stepchild must set aside their differences to escape when they find themselves being held hostage inside a deranged psychopath’s secluded property”.

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