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  1. Posted: July 27, 2016In: Thriller

    A cyber security analyst must steal the government’s undercover handler list when a hacker threatens to remotely crash his wife’s plane.

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 28, 2016 at 8:55 pm

    "When two passenger planes are set on a collision course, a cyber security analyst must play a hacker?s twisted game to save both planes." The only thing I see about this version is that it is vague in what he must do. Commit treason is more specific than 'play a hacker's twisted game'. Also, I thinRead more

    “When two passenger planes are set on a collision course, a cyber security analyst must play a hacker?s twisted game to save both planes.”

    The only thing I see about this version is that it is vague in what he must do. Commit treason is more specific than ‘play a hacker’s twisted game’. Also, I think you may want to just leave the second place out, have the hacker threaten to crash it into a populated area. At least in the logline, all we need to ?know is that the plane is set to crash. Also, if the wife is the reason he would commit treason, I say leave it in. Would he really commit treason for a bunch of strangers? Why would he even be the one contacted in that case? He would be much more likely to deviate from the hacker’s plan if it weren’t someone he cared about on that plane.

    Example:?When a hacker threatens to remotely crash his wife’s plane unless he commits treason, a government cyber security analyst must on while take control?of the plane before the hacker crashes it.?(~32 words)

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  2. Posted: July 27, 2016In: Family

    When he invents inter-dimensional video messaging, a friendless whiz kid hides his discovery from his loud and obnoxious adult colleagues to develop a friendship with an alien delinquent in peace (and quiet).

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    Added an answer on July 27, 2016 at 8:44 pm

    "When he invents inter-dimensional video messaging, a friendless whiz kid hides his discovery from his loud and obnoxious adult colleagues to develop a friendship with an alien delinquent in peace (and quiet)." Example:?When his inter-dimensional video chat contacts an alien,a nerdy kid must hide hiRead more

    “When he invents inter-dimensional video messaging, a friendless whiz kid hides his discovery from his loud and obnoxious adult colleagues to develop a friendship with an alien delinquent in peace (and quiet).”

    Example:?When his inter-dimensional video chat contacts an alien,a nerdy kid must hide his discovery so the alien will continue to be his only friend.?(~24 words.)

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  3. Posted: July 27, 2016In: Thriller

    A cyber security analyst must steal the government’s undercover handler list when a hacker threatens to remotely crash his wife’s plane.

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 27, 2016 at 8:40 pm

    "A cyber security analyst for the government must complete a series of treasonable tasks while secretly attempting to find the hacker threatening to collide his wife?s plane with another if he fails." I think saying 'commit treason' conveys the action he must take clearly enough. Example:?When a hacRead more

    “A cyber security analyst for the government must complete a series of treasonable tasks while secretly attempting to find the hacker threatening to collide his wife?s plane with another if he fails.”

    I think saying ‘commit treason’ conveys the action he must take clearly enough.

    Example:?When a hacker remotely hijacks his wife’s plane, a government cyber security analyst must commit treason to stop him from causing the plane to crash.?(~25 words)

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