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  1. Posted: July 17, 2016In: Examples

    In a dystopic future where humanity is sterile, a disillusioned man must escort the first pregnant woman in 18 years to a safe haven.

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 20, 2016 at 8:57 pm

    "If everyone is sterile how does she become pregnant?" That is the point of the movie; an anomaly in their daily life. No one else has been pregnant in years, so when this woman somehow becomes pregnant they must protect her in order to preserve the species.

    “If everyone is sterile how does she become pregnant?”

    That is the point of the movie; an anomaly in their daily life. No one else has been pregnant in years, so when this woman somehow becomes pregnant they must protect her in order to preserve the species.

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  2. Posted: July 18, 2016In: Comedy

    After his terminally ill and clinically dead bitch of a wife miraculously revives her self, a depressed man must find a way to free himself of his life long commitment.

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 20, 2016 at 6:19 am

    After his clinically dead bitch of a wife miraculously revives herself, the?henpecked?husband jumps off the roof of the hospital.?(~21 words) I do suggest you add some sort of twist. Maybe at the end he lives, his goal failed, and then his wife chews his ear off while he's lying in the hospital bed?Read more

    After his clinically dead bitch of a wife miraculously revives herself, the?henpecked?husband jumps off the roof of the hospital.?(~21 words)

    I do suggest you add some sort of twist. Maybe at the end he lives, his goal failed, and then his wife chews his ear off while he’s lying in the hospital bed?

    I like henpecked, but dpg I believe he intends for her actually be considered dead, not just in a coma.

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  3. Posted: July 19, 2016In: Adventure

    When overzealous backpackers breach the entrance to a subterranean temple, they awaken a territorial man-eating Yeti and must explore uncharted depths for dear life – and an exit.

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 20, 2016 at 6:08 am

    When they?accidentally?wake a man-eating Yeti, three overzealous backpackers must search a dangerous subterranean temple to find an escape.?(~21 words) How many backpackers are there actually? I just made up three to put a specific number. I think it would help if you mention a specific reason theyRead more

    When they?accidentally?wake a man-eating Yeti, three overzealous backpackers must search a dangerous subterranean temple to find an escape.?(~21 words)

    How many backpackers are there actually? I just made up three to put a specific number. I think it would help if you mention a specific reason they are there- to find a priceless artifact, looking for specific creature that isn’t the Yeti, but they happen to stumble across it because the Yeti is a guardian, etc. For what purpose are they adventuring?

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