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In search of her origins, a confused young woman learns her father may have been a Decorated War Vet, however not from earth, now she finds herself in a fight to survive against a relentless alien warrior and a greedy corporation after her unique DNA
"The plot is her fighting the alien and stopping it.?? The inciting incident is when the alien lands and begins to hunt her," Okay. Then what is the goal she pursues because of this? Specifically, what does she aim to do, what is the point of the story? Example:?When she is attacked by an alien, a hRead more
“The plot is her fighting the alien and stopping it.?? The inciting incident is when the alien lands and begins to hunt her,”
Okay. Then what is the goal she pursues because of this? Specifically, what does she aim to do, what is the point of the story?
Example:?When she is attacked by an alien, a half-alien must keep her blood?away from the alien?so she can prevent them from creating an army of?super soldiers?from her DNA.?(~32 words)
So does the corporation send the alien?
See lessIs the first film following a different character? Or does she just start to find out about her origins toward the end of that?
In search of her origins, a confused young woman learns her father may have been a Decorated War Vet, however not from earth, now she finds herself in a fight to survive against a relentless alien warrior and a greedy corporation after her unique DNA
"I don?t know if how all this would go into the logline?? I understand I want the hook but I can?t say everything.? There are some great posted/suggestions? in this thread but how do you answer all of them in two sentence?? This is where I?m finding it difficult as to how much to say." What is the pRead more
“I don?t know if how all this would go into the logline?? I understand I want the hook but I can?t say everything.? There are some great posted/suggestions? in this thread but how do you answer all of them in two sentence?? This is where I?m finding it difficult as to how much to say.”
What is the plot of the story about? Is about about her learning to use her powers to stop a corporation, is it finding her birth parents, is it fighting an alien? What is the actual plot? What does the inciting incident lead her to do, what is the goal?
See lessAfter his terminally ill and clinically dead bitch of a wife miraculously revives her self, a depressed man must find a way to free himself of his life long commitment.
"After his terminally ill and clinically dead bitch of a wife miraculously revives her self, a depressed man jumps of the roof of a very tall hospital to be free for the rest of his life." I think in this case it might be fine to leave the way the original had it. The one thing I notice is why do yoRead more
“After his terminally ill and clinically dead bitch of a wife miraculously revives her self, a depressed man jumps of the roof of a very tall hospital to be free for the rest of his life.”
I think in this case it might be fine to leave the way the original had it.
The one thing I notice is why do you say both “terminally ill and clinically dead”? If she’s declared dead, does it matter that she’s ill? Even if she is still ill, the story isn’t about her sickness, it’s about her husband trying to break free of her.
Example:?After his clinically dead bitch of a wife miraculously revives herself, a depressed man must find a way to free himself of his life long commitment.?(~26 words)
or
See lessAfter his clinically dead bitch of a wife miraculously revives herself, a depressed man jumps off a hospital’s roof to finally be free of her.?(~25 words)