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  1. Posted: July 27, 2016In: Thriller

    An art thief must survive an auction where a masked killer hunts the bidders for their secret sins.

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 27, 2016 at 12:06 pm

    What is the actual plot? Is the sole goal to survive? Example:?An art thief must use his skills in order to trick a masked killer who is killing bidders at an auction because of their past sins.?(~27 words) I put this goal because it makes him proactive. He decides to put his art thievery skills toRead more

    What is the actual plot? Is the sole goal to survive?

    Example:?An art thief must use his skills in order to trick a masked killer who is killing bidders at an auction because of their past sins.?(~27 words)

    I put this goal because it makes him proactive. He decides to put his art thievery skills to the test so he can escape the situation. But that’s just my example.

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  2. Posted: July 27, 2016In: SciFi

    When her mad-scientist sister finds a way to channel through to her autistic son’s mind, a desperate mother finds out it eventually let a door open to another realm.

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    Added an answer on July 27, 2016 at 12:02 pm

    "When her mad-scientist sister finds a way to channel through to her autistic son?s mind, a desperate mother finds out it eventually let a door open to another realm." What does it mean to channel through someone's mind? This logline does not describe a plot. Only the inciting incident. As a resultRead more

    “When her mad-scientist sister finds a way to channel through to her autistic son?s mind, a desperate mother finds out it eventually let a door open to another realm.”

    What does it mean to channel through someone’s mind?

    This logline does not describe a plot. Only the inciting incident. As a result of that incident, what becomes the goal? What action does the mother take?

    Example:?When a mother finds out that her autistic son is able to access another realm…

    Then, what does she aim to do? Dissect him? Figure out if other autistic kids have the same ability? What’s the goal?

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  3. Posted: July 24, 2016In: Horror

    A French bisexual woman likes to sleep with her victims before she eats them. When the zombies attack, she is faced with a moral dilemma.

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 24, 2016 at 11:37 pm

    "A French bisexual woman likes to sleep with her victims before she eats them. When the zombies attack, she is faced with a moral dilemma." This doesn't describe the plot. What is the inciting incident? What is the event that upsets her status quo? What is the Uncle Ben's death to this Peter Parker?Read more

    “A French bisexual woman likes to sleep with her victims before she eats them. When the zombies attack, she is faced with a moral dilemma.”

    This doesn’t describe the plot.

    What is the inciting incident? What is the event that upsets her status quo? What is the Uncle Ben’s death to this Peter Parker?
    As a result of that event, what does the woman aim to do? What is the goal of the story? For example, Peter Parker wants to live up to his uncle’s teachings and use his great power responsibly.
    What action does she take to achieve it? Peter Parker uses his smarts and powers to become Spider-Man, to save lives. What does you character do?

    Try checking out the Training tab at the top of the page if you haven’t already.

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