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Obsessed with causality, a mathematician creates future simulation software only for it to predict he’ll die in three days unless he is prepared to kill a complete stranger, who is somehow connected to his fate, but instead he begins falling for her
Even in stories with villains as the protagonist, the reason the become villains is often?because of noble or sympathetic reasons. Or they go on the idea that the story is showing the villain's side instead of the hero, meaning that it's just a story about bad people doing bad things. But the upcomiRead more
Even in stories with villains as the protagonist, the reason the become villains is often?because of noble or sympathetic reasons. Or they go on the idea that the story is showing the villain’s side instead of the hero, meaning that it’s just a story about bad people doing bad things.
See lessBut the upcoming “Suicide Squad” makes my point. The usual villains, in exchange of early release, take up black ops missions that others will not do. They are still villains, but they are put into a familiar role: an action hero type role.
If your character started more sympathetic it would be fine. But the goal from the start is to kill a seemingly innocent woman. Because some software told him to. So if he kills her, what if he dies anyway? What did she die for? If he doesn’t kill her, would he even die at all? He is killing someone to save his own life, and he doesn’t even know truly how she?factors into his death.
If from the start the woman were a known bad guy, it would be better. He’s stopping a bad person, and he gets a benefit.
Robots were not the cause of mankind’s destruction. Instead, they will attempt to bring us back from extinction.
"Robots were not the cause of mankind?s destruction. Instead, they will attempt to bring us back from extinction." There is no character described here. Is the character a human or a robot? What do the robots do to bring humans back from extinction? Do they use collected DNA to make new ones? What iRead more
“Robots were not the cause of mankind?s destruction. Instead, they will attempt to bring us back from extinction.”
There is no character described here. Is the character a human or a robot? What do the robots do to bring humans back from extinction? Do they use collected DNA to make new ones? What is the plot, who is the character?
Who is the protagonist, what is that character’s goal, and what do they do to reach it?
See less(REVISED) When an antisocial apocalypse ?prepper? is the only person in her small town uninfected by a virus transmitted through the trial of a ?telepathic phone?, she must stop preparing for the world?s end and start saving it.
"When a virus spreads through a small town making everyone dangerously impulsive, an apocalypse ?prepper? must stop preparing for the world?s end and find a cure to save her town." Better. But cut some words out. Example:?When a deadly virus infects her small town, an apocalypse prepper must find aRead more
“When a virus spreads through a small town making everyone dangerously impulsive, an apocalypse ?prepper? must stop preparing for the world?s end and find a cure to save her town.”
Better. But cut some words out.
Example:?When a deadly virus infects her small town, an apocalypse prepper must find a way to cure it and stop it from spreading.?(~23 words)
But what specifically does she do? In my earlier example, I said use the supplies she’s hoarded. Is it something similar? Must she find an uninfected doctor? What is it?
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